Portraits in Miniature
My father, he was a mountaineer, His fist was a knotty hammer; He was quick on his feet as a running deer, And he spoke with a Yankee stammer.
My mother, she was merry and brave, And so she came to her labor, With a tall green fir for her doctor grave And a stream for her comforting neighbor.
So begins William Sycamore’s account of his life. Right off the bat, the poet captures our attention with his rollicking verse and incisive description. Immediately, we know that here are a husband and wife who are fiercely independent, spirited, and brave. The young William is introduced from birth to this same life of pioneer grit, “cradled on twigs of pine/ And the skin of a mountain lion.”They were right, tight boys, never sulky or slow, A fruitful, a goodly muster. The eldest died at the Alamo. The youngest fell with Custer.
Again, in just a few words, Benét gives us the measure of his subject characters. “Right, tight boys” is a grand summation of sons any parent would be proud to claim as their own. Here a mild objection is in order, as the deaths of two of those sons—the first at the Alamo (1836) and the last on the Little Big Horn River (1876)—are chronologically unlikely. We must assume that Benét indulged himself in this poetic license to mark two significant dates from the Old West.Till I lost my boyhood and found my wife, A girl like a Salem clipper! A woman straight as a hunting-knife With eyes as bright as the Dipper!
The exclamation marks indicate William’s joy and delight in her, and in his brief description is a young woman who would likely appeal to any man. The “Salem clipper” refers to the sleek sailing vessels of the time, and those eyes “bright as the Dipper” not only reveal a sparkling and joyful girl but also are an indication of the direction she brings to William’s life, since the Big Dipper leads to the North Star.The Lives They Led
In the first eight stanzas of his ballad, Benét vividly paints some impressions of frontier life. We learn that William grew up in “the Bloody Ground of Kentucky,” a state nickname that native Americans used to dissuade white settlers from exploring Kentucky. In the early 20th century, the moniker still had widespread recognition. From his boyhood, William recollects “a coonskin cap/ And the smell of bayberry candles.” There are “cabin logs, with the bark still rough,” and “the tall, lank visitors, brown as snuff,/ With their long, straight squirrel-rifles.”I can hear them dance, like a foggy song, Through the deepest one of my slumbers, The fiddle squeaking the boots along And my father calling the numbers.
The quick feet shaking the puncheon-floor, And the fiddle squealing and squealing, Till the dried herbs rattled above the door And the dust went up to the ceiling.
With the exception of the puncheon planking, which were floors made from split logs hewn smooth on one side with the rough side facing the earth, and the drying herbs on the ceiling (a common pioneer practice), some of today’s readers may have experienced this same squealing of fiddles and a caller announcing the dance steps, and can relate well to this scene.The Death of a ‘Tired Fox’
At last an old man and grief-stricken “when they fenced the land,” William saddles an unbroken colt and dies when he “threw me down like a thunderbolt/ And rolled on me as I lay there.” His voice reaches us from beyond the grave. He says rather proudly, “I died in my boots like a pioneer,” and is now at peace lying in the “fat, black soil” of the prairie.And my youth returns, like the rains of Spring, And my sons, like the wild-geese flying; And I lie and hear the meadow-lark sing And have much content in my dying.
Go play with the towns you have built of blocks, The towns where you would have bound me! I sleep in my earth like a tired fox, And my buffalo have found me.
Here, Benét has the old man mirror the thoughts found in Robert Louis Stevenson’s “Requiem”:Under the wide and starry sky, Dig the grave and let me lie. Glad did I live and gladly die, And I laid me down with a will.
This be the verse you grave for me: Here he lies where he longed to be; Home is the sailor, home from sea, And the hunter home from the hill.
We Could Do With Some Romance
Some who read Benét’s ballad may find that it romanticizes American pioneers and the westward movement, and I wholeheartedly agree. I offer that opinion not as a critique but as a compliment.We could use a little more romanticizing when it comes to the past. The elixir of adventure, tribulations, and dreams experienced by our ancestors, when recollected, fires up our own imagination and ambitions. Too often we dwell on the warts and blemishes, the flaws and failings of those who came before us, forgetting to see their visions and their virtues, and those “eyes as bright as the Dipper.”
Our culture will always be in need of the virtues found in Stephen Benét’s idealized pioneer: independence, fortitude, and a zest for life. If a bit of romanticizing livens up such lessons as these from history, count me in.